When I opened my eyes, it was all empty inside,
As it was the last judgement night.
I could see my life journey for one last time, before my soul, along with all the memories were going to die
They made me the omniscient of my life and I was standing there being paranoid.
And with a blink,
I saw a bairn getting pampered by all,
I wanted to shed my tears off but still had the same empty soul I used to hold.
That was the time when I was growing under the shadow of light,
Unaware of the brutal world waiting for me outside.
They tried well to create a hell around,
But I always succeeded to turn it into paradise.
It was all about downs,
When I saw the shadow started growing dark and long,
I could hear some voices, unknown of the language but it was harsh and strong.
And I never knew a broken heart could keep on breaking even after so long.
But as it is said there's a morning after every night,
Two restless souls were waiting to reunite.
I found a person from that crowd where people only used to flatter.
I held his hands tight but somewhere I was still shattered.
I won't deny, there was something I was able to feel again, that spring in his steps and the spring in nature seems to be playing a match,
It felt like in previous life he was taken off, so now the souls were trying to reattach.
The time when I was unable to value a moment,
He made me fall for even a drop of rain with real sentiments.
After meeting him I realised,
if the world can leave you empty, love can make you whole,
beauty is just a praisable word,
always go for a beautiful soul.
The time that was given to us, burnt like a candle but at the same time I knew there's no end of a circle.
I believed those memories might get flickered but it will never die,
I'll be waiting for you for one more time to recognise your soul by just looking at your eyes.
Everything faded, I was all empty inside,
That was the last judgement night.
- khushi 🍸
People believed or even if we took this as a philosophy, the last judgement is something where the life of a person is described after they die so here I have put myself in there shoes and woke up for the last time when I could actually feel my life after death to see my beautiful human journey for one last time.
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